I started writing children’s picture stories a few years ago after attending a district required reading staff development. At one point during the class, our instructor read us a story similar to this. I don’t remember exactly what the point was for reading this book. Some lesson idea, I suppose. I don’t even remember the title.
Anyway, the story was about a wolf who comes across some barnyard animals that are reading. The animals end up teaching the wolf to read, they all become friends and live happily ever after.
I heard the story and I was very disappointed. You see, I felt that the story should have had a much different ending. I went straight home and wrote my first rhyming children's picture story. However, seeing as I can’t draw anything more than stick people and I don’t even do that very well, you’ll have to create the pictures in your mind.
Enjoy
Bear's Lesson
I know of a sheep, a chicken and pig,
When I met these guys, my life it changed big
You see, I’m a bear and what I have to say,
Is I eat all these creatures on most every day
The problem begins with me walking along,
When all of a sudden, I heard a strange song
The music was odd, though it had a good beat,
And the voices I heard, to my ears, were a treat
Then I saw it, a kind of old broken down shack,
It was three shades of red with a wobbly smoke stack
Quick up to the window, I did softly creep,
The first thing I saw was this rather large sheep
I sat there just dreaming of having sheep stew,
When a squatty, plump pig waddled into my view
Well now the night’s meal was almost complete
I’d have mutton stew, then the other white meat
But nothing compares to me seeing the chicken,
I became Pavlov’s dog, as my chops I was lickin’
Without thinking longer, I knocked down the door,
I raised both my arms and let out a loud, “ROAR!”
In the past, well, each roar was just loads of fun,
Cause all over the place my new dinner would run
I’d have a real blast chasing down the night’s feast,
And I wouldn’t stop ‘til I’d gulped down each beast
But these new taste treats didn’t follow that rule,
I stood with arms raised, feeling much like a fool
My actions, it seemed, they had one small hitch,
Pig said, “My good fellow, your roar was off pitch”
Pig showed me a seat, and bewildered I sat,
When sheep spoke up and said, “Not to mention, you’re flat”
“We could give you lessons,” the nice chicken said,
I smiled really big and nodded my head
I went to that shack for six weeks, twice a day,
For they taught about music in more that one way
I learned that I sing in what’s known as bass,
That’s why, when I roar, it shakes up the place
My teachers, they said that for me solo’s best,
For I tend to be loud and drown out all the rest
And that’s when the lesson I’d learned, it hit big,
I had three new friends…sheep, chicken and pig
See, they didn’t think that I was all scary,
Just because I am loud, big, mean and hairy
No, they took the time to help out a bear,
The fact is, we’re different, but they didn’t care
So when my last lesson had come to an end,
I stuck out my paw and said “Bye” to each friend
I turned to the door, but then I looked back,
And grabbed that fat chicken for a last good-bye snack
Sheep and pig stared in fear as I started to chew,
Coughing feathers, I said, “Guys, it's just what bears do”
5 comments:
That means a lot coming from you, because we know some of the same people.
And thanks for the name of the book. Is it a rhyming story as well?
I really enjoy your poems. It makes me want to start writing more, although mine were never funny like yours. (I have a few posted on my site. If you're interested, they're listed on the left-hand side of the page.)
The only thing about this one was that the meter was a little off. "I could give you lessons, if you're not chicken," he said sheepishly.
Oh! I'm such a pig!
Seriously, I get a kick out of your poems — especially the twisted endings!
-- Rick from Unspun™
You rock hard.
:) Val
Not only is that poem totally fun and lesson-teaching for kids, but it has the makings of an excellent published children's book. I hope you do publish it!
That ending actually is important for kids to hear, as its a lesson that can be seen in everyday life.
you a scary man
love,
real live preacher
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